Zizou!

Zizou!

Sunday, 14 October 2012

Varonda ll chapter lll

Here is chapter three:

Chapter lll The rattling pile

Varonda just had to take a peek from outside of her fort. She was desperate to see if the town was still in its normal shape. It was. The town was fine, as safe as any town could be. Varonda was still scared though. Yesterday night was terrifying. Autumn village is not safe for Varonda if Zahl's on the loose. Varonda got up and walked towards the centre of the village. She saw neighbours eating and enjoying their breakfasts as if nothing had ever happened. Of course everything was fine for them, but Varonda was still in shock. On her way to the center, Varonda heard a rattling noise. She looked behind her, and saw a pile of tin cans and empty glass bottles shaking, as if something was under the pile trying to get out.

Varonda had her hand ready incase she had to protect her self with magic. The pile of things continued shaking. Suddenly a little hand popped out from under the pile. Varonda had her sword ready. The little human look-a-like came out from under the pile. He had orange brown, white spotted hair. And was no higher then your knee. He dressed in ripped boring brown threads. “Who and WHAT are you?!” asked Varonda confused. “Fear not” said the creature in a slight faded irish accent. “Wh,wh,what are you? Good or bad? Speak!” Varonda said protecting herself the best she could. “Me mean no harm.” Varonda took a step toward the creature. “Answer me, or else.” Varonda hated to be so rough, but if he was from the dark side then she was in grave danger. “Oh, oh. Please. I mean no harm.” said the creature hiding behind the pile of things. “Muffy is kind.” Varonda walked over to the creature. “Sorry I scared you. I really didn't mean to. I'm being hunted by Zahl. So I have to be secure.” said Varonda. “No, Muffy scare you. Muffy sorry.” Varonda helped the creature off of the ground. “So, what are you?” asked Varonda. “Me? Oh, I am a fawn elf. Me tell more, but first we must get away.” said Muffy.

2 comments:

Marjory said...

Oh! Muffy sounds a real cutie.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Granny xxx

Bika said...

Wow, that's a fantastic story so far! And your English is really good! Looking forward to the next chapter as well :)